4/11/10 Patricia A. Hawkenson’s Reflections – The Last Board

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The Last Board

His father built him a swing set
imagining dirty hands
on the sturdy chains,
worn tennis to the sky.
Laughter.

But a season has passed
with new buds
giving a reason to
his tears.

How does a boy
climb closer to his mother
when she is in heaven
and he has his foot
on the last board?

5 thoughts on “4/11/10 Patricia A. Hawkenson’s Reflections – The Last Board

  1. Patricia, your poem today is bittersweet. Is this somehow a personal experience?

    I decided it was easier to comment back here.

    Yeah, I don’t know what possessed me not to copy my poem first last night. Guess I got cocky with the snotty codes. Anyhow, I won’t do THAT again.

  2. Karen,
    Thanks for posting your comments here. Come anytime. This poem came from the sound of our neighbor’s children, laughing as they played today. I am afraid my own pain, week 6 suffering with shingle nerve pain, is tainting my view of what should be a happy experience of childhood.

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